A lune is basically an American haiku. There are two forms of lunes: Kelly and Collom. The Kelly form was created by Robert Kelly and has thirteen syllables split between three lines in a 5/3/5 format. Jack Collom created the Collom lune, which is also a tercet (three self-contained lines), but is word-based rather than syllable-based. It's structure has 3 words in the first line, 5 in the second, and 3 in the last. I'm playing around with both. ~ AJ
Autumnal Lunes
Equinox morning,
Liminal
Sun, chasing shadows.
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Leaves, changing, falling -
Autumn colors paint Northern states
Red and gold.
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Soon bare trees will dot
The landscape
Waiting for the snow.
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Arachne's children grow
Fat outside my window, weaving
Traps of gossamer.
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Night is more vivid
In the fall
Dreams come readily
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Anise, cloves, pumpkin,
Cinnamon, honey, nutmeg, apples, ginger . . .
Spice the season.
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